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Kit’s poem, “Dessert”

November 28th, 2008 by kit · 5 Comments

My poem “Dessert” was published by Oysters & Chocolate, an erotic webzine. You can read it here.

-Kit

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5 responses so far ↓

  • 1 Drooling Fan Girl // Nov 29, 2008 at 12:09 am

    Eeek! Unexpected penis! Hm…Playgirl ad.

    Poem’s ok.

    I’m kind of still stuck on idea of chocolate covered oysters. (yitch)

  • 2 skzb // Nov 29, 2008 at 12:17 am

    Good going, Punalua!

  • 3 JP // Nov 29, 2008 at 2:22 pm

    Kit,

    From only two samples of you verse, I say with some delight that you have a way of creating wonderfully tense vague/precise images through a minimalist approach. Not many have that gift. As someone who almost always overly verbose, I greatly admire this trait.

    Please link any other poems you believe finished — at appropriate intervals. The two I’ve seen take time to fully appreciate.

  • 4 kit // Nov 29, 2008 at 4:50 pm

    DFG: Thanks. Sorry about the penis. I did try to let people know what kind of zine it was. ;)

    JP: Thank you! That is a very flattering complement. I can be verbose too, at times, but I’ve tried to learn to be spare in my poetry and it is wonderful to know you appreciate it.

    As for a next poem, my poem “The Green Lady” is (hopefully) due out from Aberrant Dreams sometime in 2008. I’ll be sure to post when it is available.

  • 5 JP // Dec 2, 2008 at 1:57 pm

    Not much time left in 2008, Kit, so I’ll be looking for “The Green Lady.” Nice thought, to tease with a title.

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